The the overt Antisemitism makes it come off as politically motivated and insincere.
Please remove the implication that Israel is intentionally killing civilians, and the accusation that they are engaging in genocide.
Rather then saying
Israel is killing tens of thousands of Palestinian civilian and displacing millions more.
try
Tens of thousands of Palestinian civilians are dying in the war with Israel, and millions more are being displaced.
this in addition to removing the genocide accusation will make the banner more politically neutral, and focused on advocating for the Palestinians over condemning Israel.
This is not a personal attack, it is not an attack on your politics, it is simply an appeal for depoliticalization.
The the overt Antisemitism makes it come off as politically motivated and insincere.
Please remove the implication that Israel is intentionally killing civilians, and the accusation that they are engaging in genocide.
Rather then saying
try
this in addition to removing the genocide accusation will make the banner more politically neutral, and focused on advocating for the Palestinians over condemning Israel.
This is not a personal attack, it is not an attack on your politics, it is simply an appeal for depoliticalization.